There was a girl who loved a boy truly, as it was her first love, and the boy was not paying attention to her. After a week, the girl calls the boy, asking him if she could hang out with him. Unfortunately, she is given an excuse of him being busy with school work. Later, she finds pictures on a social media site, which are very grievous, as the pictures resemble her boyfriend cheating on her. The young girl is too inexperienced to realize that it is not her fault, and she starts to lose her self-esteem. When she tries to talk to him, he is negligent and selfish by asking her to leave. The heartbroken girl, in an angry mood now just wants to take her life....
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3. Concrete Detail (Source 2)-
In addition, "A few of the children have had intercourse at as young an age as 12" (Source C).
4. Summary of commentary:
The article provides facts which prove that young love is perilous. As sexual intercourse, is a life changing event that causes many dilemmas… and usually occurs when one is mature enough and financially stable to be ready to take the responsibilities.But these days,sexual intercourse occurs when the couple has not yet entered their teenage years. The huge reasons for such actions is love, and tremendous peer pressure. As in this scenario, the kids think they fell in true love with each other. According to the kid’s thinking, sexual intercourse is a must at their age, as it is considered cool to have one… and that intercourse is not a harmful thing. Due to the false impression due to love and immense pressure, kids make such impulsive decision that can change their life.
5. Concluding sentence:
Lastly, young love is considered perilous as it makes one to take hasty or impulsive decisions, and it is proved using the play of Romeo and Juliet when they decide to get married, without knowing each other well enough and using the article of ‘Young Love’, when the statistic is listed about kids having sexual intercourse, which is an impulsive action as it can change one’s life.
B. Argument B:
Furthermore, young love is dangerous because it can cause serious consequences.
1. Concrete Detail (Source 1):
For example, "This is thy sheath; there rust and let me die " (Source A).
2. Summary of commentary:
In the play, when Juliet finds that Romeo, the one she truly loved is now dead due to her and by the miscommunication among them. She feels very mournful, and no longer wants to be alive if her better half is dead. She thinks that she should also die as she did all this to happily live with Romeo and if he is not alive then she should also die. Both Romeo and...